Sunday, July 25, 2010

Chapter Eighteen

Chapter 18 is up!


Don't read this post unless you've read the chapter!! And if you have read the chapter I hope you left me a lovely review :)

This chapter is more James oriented, as I thought you guys were getting bored with Sirius/Hayley. But don't worry, Chapter 19 is Sirius/Hayley. Also, this chapter, sees the end of the Rosier-Hayley plot. I just counldn't continue it anymore - it was just getting to dark, but a bit of the darkness returns next chapter. Just a bit.

This I thought was a humourous chapter, James' adorable in this. He's all stuttery and adorable :)
We see a reprise in Sheldon. Or as Sirius likes to call him; the turkey. The Sheldon line doesn't pick up until alot later as the Christmas chapters are coming up. They'll come out in December, hopefully!
I absolutely love the Christmas chapters, as Christmas is my favourite holiday! Although I do live in Australia, and it doesn't snow, I love the beautiful Christmas trees and the carols and jingles. And of course the food!

Let me know if you have any questions, want to know something about the fic/characters or simply want to say hola ;)


xox 2envy

Delays

Sorry about delays on the next chapter. It should post by tomorrow, but you never know could take longer. 
But Christmas is coming soon, should be early 20s chapters, and I very much love the Christmas chapters, I've had them for a couple of years.

I think I first started to write this fanfic in '05 and I posted it in '07ish on fanfiction.net. I published a few chapters on hpfanfiction.com but then it was called "Breathe Me". The title was based on a song by Sia. But scraped that because it was a dodgy story and I didn't recieve many reviews. I reposted the story in '08 but I didn't update often (more less than now). But the story started to pick up; and I got into. But orginally:
- Hayley was spelt Hailey
- She was supposed to be James' cousin and her last name was to be Dawson
- her parent's were supposed to be more stricter and a bit more pure blood crazy unlike James'
- she had a secret relationship with Snape (haha, how bad was the previous story)
- Lily's friends were supposed to be Julie (who would end up with Remus), Cat/Catlin (who would be a third wheel to his and Hailey's relationship)
- Lily was supposed to go out with Terry, not Hayley
- at one point the Story was called "Beyond the Sea" - and at some point in the chapter a character was supposed to make reference to it
- the first chapter when i wrote it, I think was in Remus' P.O.V. but then changed it to James' but forgot to change some of the word to first person terms so that's why there was so many typos. The first chapter now begins with Nobodys' P.O.V. and moved from being in James' room to the garden\

And that is all I can remember for now. Anyways, I thought it was interesting to know how far this story as come, I've been writing it for almost 5 years. I shall post again with the Chapter 18: The One with the Nakedness. Let me know if you have any questions, want to know something about the fic/characters or simply want to say hey.

xox 2envy

Friday, July 16, 2010

The One

Hello
If you're here, you probably found the link at my author's page. think of this blog as a longer A/N but with much more secrets revealed.

xox 2envy